some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely
It is considered by some
people
that sharing every possible scientific research
, business and the academy world's pieces of information is a positive thing, while others believe that sharing highly valuable or important data
freely is not a logical thing. I strongly agree with the latter.
On the one
hand, some convincingly argue that publishing all sorts of data
freely would have a negative influence on people
's perspective toward them. Considering that one
may believe if something was of high value, it would cost they a lot, sharing crucial data
freely would develop the notion that it is not worth reading or utilizing. For instance
, there are a number of free downloadable papers on Google scholar, however
, there are a limited number of people
who are curious to study them.
On the other hand
, people
who argue that one
should share scientific research
, business, and academic pieces of information on different platforms, may claim that a scientist’s duty is nothing but to expand the edge of knowledge in their area of research
. They insist that in the 21st century when we are fighting against discrimination it is humiliating to limit critical pieces of data
to the ones who can afford it. However
, I do not find this
statement convincing as I am of the belief that if one
needs something relentlessly, one
will find a way to acquire it. As a successful example, I can mention Iranian students who have limited access to global scientific websites due to sanctions imposed by the USA but they managed to alter these restrictions to an opportunity.
In conclusion, far-reaching information that needs considerable time and energy to be attained should not be shared without fees. Moreover
, publishing the results of the time-consuming research
process freely has no financial feasibility for the scientists.Submitted by ali.veisi.93 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite