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The charts show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The given line graphs illustrate the number of
households
 that own technological devices ( washing
machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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,
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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) and
hours
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the hours
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 spent on housework.
Overall
, in 1920 people spent exactly 50
hours
for
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doing
works
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work
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 at
home
, but in 2019 when the percentage of
households
 with new technologies increased, the number of working
hours
 at
home
 declined to 10
hours
 per week.
At
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In
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 the
beginning
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,beginning
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 no one
holded
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hold
refrigerator
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a refrigerator
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 at
home
 and only 30% and 40% of them had
vacuum
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a vacuum
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 cleaner and washing
machine
 respectively. After 40 years the percentage of
households
 with
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 soared to 90% and reached the highest point. Owners of washing
machine
 and
vacuum
 cleaner moderately
rised
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rose
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 to 70%. At the same
time
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,time
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 people spent 30
hours
 less
for
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on
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 housework than at the start From 1960 to 2019 the percentage of
households
 who keep
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 and
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 levelled off and reached 100%
percent
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per cent
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,
while
 owners of washing
machine
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machines
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 slightly increased
for
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by
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 5%.
Hours
 spent
for
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apply
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doing
works
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work
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 at
home
 between 1960 and 2019
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decreased
dcreased
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decreased
for
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by
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 10
hours
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, machine, refrigerator, vacuum, hours, home with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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