Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affects individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend
Competition is
a
effective trait for individuals in Change the article
an
most
Add an article
the most
community
. Fix the agreement mistake
communities
This
essay will discuss how competitiveness affects people
and if it a
good or Add a missing verb
is a
band
trend.
For humans to survive, they have to compete with other Correct your spelling
bad
people
in for
them to satisfy their Change preposition
apply
need
. The population in our society today is becoming more than the resources available to sustain everyone. There is a saying that survival is for the fittest. Fix the agreement mistake
needs
This
as
made Correct your spelling
has
people
have the mentality that they need to strive for them to get the best. There is a popular Television program called the lions
den. ItChange to a genitive case
lion's
a
programme that Add a missing verb
is a
help
to Change the verb form
helps
sponsors
someone who has a potent idea to invent something or needs fund to produce a particular product in large quantity or finance to expand their business. Wrong verb form
sponsor
Although
The Folks who go for this
offer have to compete with their mate in other for them to be able to meet with the investors, The investors will only invest on
the persons who can convince them to put their resources into their business. Change preposition
in
This
way, the person who get
the deal is the individual Change the verb form
gets
that is
able to persuade the sponsors.
In my own idea, Competitiveness as help
some Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
people
to do things they never imagine they can do, it has help
to build human confidence and Change the verb form
helped
also
increase large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
the
folk Correct article usage
apply
into
Correct your spelling
in to
discover
new things and how it can be done in different waysChange the verb form
discovering
..
Being competitive helps youngsters to be able to achieve success in their education and vocational training. For every successful competition, Replace the punctuation
.
...
their
is always a reward. Replace the word
there
For instance
, in a football game, different team's
comes together to compete for a trophy. The best team will win not by chance but by the effort they put in the game.
To conclude, the drive population shows as an encouraging quality in most Change noun form
teams
nation
. ItFix the agreement mistake
nations
Add the comma(s)
, as been discuss,
as
been Correct your spelling
has
discuss
that it Wrong verb form
discussed
as
Correct your spelling
is
a
optimistic movement Change the article
an
on
Change preposition
among
people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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