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Early technological developments helped people more than recent technological developments do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#developments #people
In
this
 fast-paced
world
, machinery
development
 plays a massive role in
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a
day to day
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 lifestyle, starting right from an electronic toothbrush in the morning till we rest in a bed we use multiple useful gadgets. According to ,me recent
technologies
 are more useful than old
technologies
. On one hand, It has been proven that automation helps to reduce manual effort whereas plenty of manual effort was needed
on
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 earlier decades.
However
, robotics has been
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 latest method of innovation, but there are some disadvantages too.
On the other hand
, due to plenty of computer-based mechanisms people going lazy nowadays, but
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 is not in the older days. Since more technology upgrades have been happening all over the
world
 upgrading ourselves is
also
 much needed to run along with
this
world
. Even though past
technologies
 were useful to some extent it was clear that they might have not computerized as
such
 as the new generation does ,
Moreover
 the education system has not been educating the needs and
requirement
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 of technology when there is no need
of
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 it. Until there is a necessity nothing would have been innovated, but in
this
 modern
world
 without technological
development
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 we wouldn't have reached places. Older people had very diminutive constraints and demands
hence
 there was not much
development
 but
the
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 modern era is vice versa nothing is possible without
computer
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 and automation. I am a strong advocate of recent
technologies
 that have
been
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reached an immense level of heights. I believe automation and technology
development
 is much required for a country to get develop. Hereby I disagree that old technological developments helped people more than recent technological
development
.
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