Some suggest that young people should take a job between school and the university. Discuss what advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

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There is no shortage of opinions on whether young people should continue their study process immediately after
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or
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take a
job
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. But if I were forced to choose, I would definitely opt for applying for a
job
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first
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,
this
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approach has its own pros and cons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
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First
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and foremost, the main advantage of taking a
job
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during the gap year is the ability to try different jobs and realize what you like to do the most.
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, it is hard to choose a field of study if you don't understand what you will be required to do later.
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, working in a specific company gives you a wider point of view for your career growth possibilities.
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, after graduation from
school
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I applied for a
job
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and
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, gained some experience, and at the same time
earned
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some money. For these reasons, I would surely suggest all young people to try getting some work
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and only
then
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decide where they want to get an education.
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, the disadvantage of postponing your college enrollment is the high chance that you will have no desire to attend later. Let's say you decided to take the
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first
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. You see all the opportunities how to succeed in the
job
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, and
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it is so easy to delve into the work process and stay only with a
school
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level of graduation.
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, my friend Mark, who lives in the US, decided to do exactly like
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, and only after 7 years of work, he
realized
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that for the leading position in the company he is actually required to be at least an undergraduate. For
this
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reason, you need to think thoughtfully if you want to start working immediately or better to get a university degree
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first
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. To sum up, in
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light of the above-mentioned reasons, I want to emphasize that both taking a
job
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between
school
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and university and enrolling immediately are good ways, but you need to decide carefully what is the best option for you.
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