Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are best teachers?
According to Hindu culture,
parents
and teacher
are treated as Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
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a god
god
, Fix the agreement mistake
gods
however
I wholeheartedly concur with the above statement, and will elaborate Add a comma
,however
further
in next
paragraphs.
To start with, Correct article usage
the next
first
,parents
always remain with their children
all the time
, however
teachers worked in a closed environment and remain with students for a limited duration.Add a comma
,however
Second
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The second
teacher
teach
their students about social science and share best practices with them, and moved to the Change the verb form
teaches
next
chapter in the next
class, but parents
do much of the practical work with their ward, like greet everybody whom they are interacting with, and get a scold from their parents
if they are not following them.For example
, I always ask my daughter to greet everyone whom we are meeting with
and now she develop a habit of it.
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apply
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Furthermore
Futhermore
, teachers taught at their students about a topic, explain Correct your spelling
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the
things clearly,Correct article usage
apply
repeat
it again and again until and unless every student is not clear with the topic. Some subjects are interesting, Correct word choice
and repeat
however
some are difficult to understand. At home, Add a comma
,however
parents
always act as a teacher
for there
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their
children
. They spend a good time
with them and clear their doubts, despite they have other work to do. For example
, during my school time
,I was weak in maths and I tried my best to absorb all the things during the classroom session,but I usually forgot the
things easily.My father helped me a lot in developing my understanding while managing his work during Correct article usage
apply
the
business hours.
To conclude, in my Correct article usage
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opinion
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,opinion
parents
played a vital role in grooming their children
then
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than
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a teacher
the teacher
teacher
. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Parent
main focus is always on their wards, whereas Fix the agreement mistake
Parents
teacher
had to focus on every Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
children
within Change to a singular noun
child
the
limited Correct article usage
a
time
period,therefore
teachers cannot able to understand which student is lacking in which area.Submitted by abt.dhruv on
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