Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are best teachers?

According to Hindu culture,
parents
and
teacher
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are treated as
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god
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,
however
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I wholeheartedly concur with the above statement, and will elaborate
further
in
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paragraphs. To start with,
first
,
parents
always remain with their
children
all the
time
,
however
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teachers worked in a closed environment and remain with students for a limited duration.
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teacher
teach
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their students about social science and share best practices with them, and moved to the
next
chapter in the
next
class, but
parents
do much of the practical work with their ward, like greet everybody whom they are interacting with, and get a scold from their
parents
if they are not following them.
For example
, I always ask my daughter to greet everyone whom we are meeting
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and now she develop a habit of it.
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Furthermore
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, teachers taught at their students about a topic, explain
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things clearly,
repeat
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it again and again until and unless every student is not clear with the topic. Some subjects are interesting,
however
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some are difficult to understand. At home,
parents
always act as a
teacher
for
there
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children
. They spend a good
time
with them and clear their doubts, despite they have other work to do.
For example
, during my school
time
,I was weak in maths and I tried my best to absorb all the things during the classroom session,but I usually forgot
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things easily.My father helped me a lot in developing my understanding while managing his work during
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business hours. To conclude, in my
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parents
played a vital role in grooming their
children
then
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a teacher
the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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.
Parent
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main focus is always on their wards, whereas
teacher
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had to focus on every
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within
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limited
time
period,
therefore
teachers cannot able to understand which student is lacking in which area.
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