Government are spending too much money on a space research while there are still lots of problems on earth to what extent you agree or disagree ??

Nowdays
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countries are competing with each other
on
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space
research
where countries are spending billions of dollars on satellites
to
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extra terrestrial exploration. I wholeheartedly agree with the above statement that on earth human is facing critical problems
then
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space
exploration, and I will elaborate
further
in the
next
paragraphs. To start with,
government
and private organisations
spending
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billions $ on
space
research
programs,including exploring other planets,to show technical
superority
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superiority
over other countries ,
however
neglecting local or global
issues
.If a portion of
a
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taxpayer
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money
spent
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on local/global problems,those
issues
can be resolved
easily
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than
anticipated
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an anticipated
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time period.Some global
issues
are
water
pollution,global warming and depleting sweet
water
resources. In India, the biggest challenge is drinking
water
,though the country is surrounded by
water
from three sides.If the
government
spends
quarter
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a quarter
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portion of the funds allocated to a
space
research
program,
this
problem could be resolved easily by
research
and developing clean technology
of
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converting salty
water
to
a
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sweet
water
.
Furthermore
,
world
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the world
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is facing serious challenges
on
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carbon
emission
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emissions
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impacting weather and
environment
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.Nowadays,
main
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source of energy is coming
through
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fossil fuels.If the whole world closely
work
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on
this
challenge
,
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and spend half of the
world
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budget allocated to extra-terrestrial exploration in finding alternative green energy,
than
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this
problem could be resolved easily.New horizons can be opened in finding alternative
of
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gas-guzzling
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gas guzzling
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machines to
efficient
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an efficient
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green
source
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sources
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of energy for private and public transportation.
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, green hydrogen could be alternative
of
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fossil fuels,but
current
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the current
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challenges
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is extracting hydrogen
molecule
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molecules
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from H2O.
Government
can spend more on researching,exploring and developing green technology to extract it. To conclude, in my opinion,
government
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the government
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should create
vision
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a vision
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document around local/ global challenges
,
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and redirect allocated funds from
space
research
to resolve local/global
issues
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Long-term survival
  • Scientific understanding
  • Technological advances
  • Earthly benefits
  • Pressing issues
  • Climate change
  • STEM fields (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • Balanced approach
  • Geopolitical stability
  • Space exploration
  • Space research
  • International cooperation
  • Priority
  • Immediate issues
  • Global challenges
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