Government are spending too much money on a space research while there are still lots of problems on earth to what extent you agree or disagree ??

Nowdays

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countries are competing with each other

on

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in

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space

research

where countries are spending billions of dollars on satellites

to

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for

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extra terrestrial exploration. I wholeheartedly agree with the above statement that on earth human is facing critical problems

then

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space

exploration, and I will elaborate

further

in the

next

paragraphs. To start with,

government

and private organisations

spending

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billions $ on

space

research

programs,including exploring other planets,to show technical

superority

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superiority

over other countries ,

however

neglecting local or global

issues

.If a portion of

a

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taxpayer

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money

spent

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on local/global problems,those

issues

can be resolved

easily

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than

anticipated

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an anticipated

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time period.Some global

issues

are

water

pollution,global warming and depleting sweet

water

resources. In India, the biggest challenge is drinking

water

,though the country is surrounded by

water

from three sides.If the

government

spends

quarter

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portion of the funds allocated to a

space

research

program,

this

problem could be resolved easily by

research

and developing clean technology

of

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converting salty

water

to

a

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sweet

water

.

Furthermore

,

world

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the world

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is facing serious challenges

on

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carbon

emission

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emissions

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impacting weather and

environment

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the environment

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.Nowadays,

main

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source of energy is coming

through

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fossil fuels.If the whole world closely

work

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on

this

challenge

,

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and spend half of the

world

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budget allocated to extra-terrestrial exploration in finding alternative green energy,

than

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this

problem could be resolved easily.New horizons can be opened in finding alternative

of

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apply

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gas-guzzling

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gas guzzling

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gas-guzzling

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machines to

efficient

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an efficient

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green

source

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sources

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of energy for private and public transportation.

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, green hydrogen could be alternative

of

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fossil fuels,but

current

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challenges

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challenge

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is extracting hydrogen

molecule

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molecules

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from H2O.

Government

can spend more on researching,exploring and developing green technology to extract it. To conclude, in my opinion,

government

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the government

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should create

vision

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a vision

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document around local/ global challenges

,

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and redirect allocated funds from

space

research

to resolve local/global

issues

.