You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter -correct the information in the article -explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to the
last
week's article about the Jaipur city
, published in you
magazine Around The World.
I am an avid reader of Change the pronoun
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this
magazine, and I was really excited to see an article on my city
. Although
the article gave in detailed information
, I am afraid it mentioned the incorrect reason why Jaipur is also
known as the pink city
. The correction is, in the 18th century, Raja Ram Singh ordered his people to paint the city
in a pink hue in order to welcome the
queen Victoria.
Being a reputed magazine, it is very important to give out only accurate Correct article usage
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information
as people trust what the editor says, blindly. Giving wrong information
about a place can hurt the sentiments of local residents. Moreover
, it can put the reputation at stake.
I would request you kindly correct the information
in your new edition, and it would be great if you could write a public apology. In order to prevent further
errors in your articles, I would suggest you go through the details thoroughly before publishing. In my view, it is mandatory for an editor to check the facts properly.
I hope my suggestions would be taken into account and you would take a
prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Gargi DhawanRemove the article
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