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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter -correct the information in the article -explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to the
last
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 week's article about the Jaipur
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, published in
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 magazine Around The World. I am an avid reader of
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 magazine, and I was really excited to see an article on my
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.
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 the article gave in detailed
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, I am afraid it mentioned the incorrect reason why Jaipur is
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 known as the pink
city
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. The correction is, in the 18th century, Raja Ram Singh ordered his people to paint the
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 in a pink hue in order to welcome
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queen Victoria. Being a reputed magazine, it is very important to give out only accurate
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 as people trust what the editor says, blindly. Giving wrong
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 about a place can hurt the sentiments of local residents.
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, it can put the reputation at stake. I would request you kindly correct the
information
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 in your new edition, and it would be great if you could write a public apology. In order to prevent
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 errors in your articles, I would suggest you go through the details thoroughly before publishing. In my view, it is mandatory for an editor to check the facts properly. I hope my suggestions would be taken into account and you would take
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prompt action. Yours faithfully, Gargi Dhawan
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