Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are many popular competitions
such
as the Linking Words
football
world cup, and other international game occasions, which are possible in reducing international tensions and releasing patriotic Use synonyms
emotions
in a safe way. In my experience. I absolutely agree with Use synonyms
this
opinion.
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First
, modern Linking Words
life
is very tense, so humans need to reduce their Use synonyms
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life'
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life
people
must tackle a lot of issues from many Use synonyms
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aspects Use synonyms
such
as occupation, family, and social community. Spending time on sports Linking Words
events
, which they favour, helps them to relax, and recover positive energy. Especially, if family members enjoy these Use synonyms
events
together, their relationships will be closer. My father, who loves Use synonyms
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on
watching the Change preposition
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football
world cup in order to relax after working time.
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On the other hand
, there is much negative news on journals, e-news, or social pages like Facebook, and Youtube; so Linking Words
people
are influenced and have many patriotic Use synonyms
emotions
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they need to enjoy more positive Linking Words
events
to release their patriotic Use synonyms
emotions
. Sporting occasions are the most beneficial Use synonyms
events
because of their' purposes Use synonyms
such
as training in physical activities, building teammate, and art. Linking Words
People
, who watched or enjoyed these Use synonyms
events
, will gain positive Use synonyms
emotions
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also
he has a fit body.
In conclusion, because modern Linking Words
life
is very pressure and has many negative effects, Use synonyms
people
need many ways to reduce their tensions and Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
release
relase
patriotic Correct your spelling
relieve
emotions
. Enjoying a Use synonyms
football
march or any international game Use synonyms
occasions
is one of some good ways humans can do.Fix the agreement mistake
occasion
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite