Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are many popular competitions
such
as the football
world cup, and other international game occasions, which are possible in reducing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions
in a safe way. In my experience. I absolutely agree with this
opinion.
First
, modern life
is very tense, so humans need to reduce their life'
pressure. Mature Change noun form
life
people
must tackle a lot of issues from many life
aspects such
as occupation, family, and social community. Spending time on sports events
, which they favour, helps them to relax, and recover positive energy. Especially, if family members enjoy these events
together, their relationships will be closer. My father, who loves football
, spends most of his leisure time on
watching the Change preposition
apply
football
world cup in order to relax after working time.
On the other hand
, there is much negative news on journals, e-news, or social pages like Facebook, and Youtube; so people
are influenced and have many patriotic emotions
. Therefore
, they need to enjoy more positive events
to release their patriotic emotions
. Sporting occasions are the most beneficial events
because of their' purposes such
as training in physical activities, building teammate, and art. People
, who watched or enjoyed these events
, will gain positive emotions
that players share together. I love to watch Tien Minh's badminton march because he is not only fast, but also
he has a fit body.
In conclusion, because modern life
is very pressure and has many negative effects, people
need many ways to reduce their tensions and Correct your spelling
release
relase
patriotic Correct your spelling
relieve
emotions
. Enjoying a football
march or any international game occasions
is one of some good ways humans can do.Fix the agreement mistake
occasion
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