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You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: explaining the situation apologize for the inconvenience called and say what you are going to do

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Dear sir , I am writing
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 letter to inform you that I was unable to
return
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 , which I issued from your library
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 week . I am Gurinder,resident of Ludhiana. I am a student of Guru Nanak Girls College, Ludhiana and a regular visitor
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 your library . I usually issue
books
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 from your library and
return
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 them within the given time but
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 time I am unable to do because of some urgent work . Actually, my grandmother is in her late 80's , so she does not keep well.
Last
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 Sunday , she fell seriously sick because of which I have to go to Jalandhar along with my whole family .
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 , I want you to please accept my apology as I feel very bad about it . Well , I got the
books
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 issued on 20th June and the
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 date was 30th June . As I told you that I am out of time and would not able to come till 4th of July . I would definitely
return
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 the
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 on the
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 day of my
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 to Ludhiana. Hope you understand my situation and will not put any penalty. Yours Faithfully , Gurinder Kaur Grewal.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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