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As languages such as English, Spanish, and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a concern that many minority languages may disappear. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice?

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Nowadays, many minority
languages
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 have been threatened to be eliminated by the expansion of widely spoken
languages
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 like English, Spanish, and Mandarin.
This
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 issue makes some
people
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 take action to maintain their native spoken
language
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 due to several reasons like the importance of the
language
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 in the local
culture
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.
However
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, Other
people
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 believe there are many benefits to predominating certain
languages
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, and I agree with
this
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 point of view. Some
people
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 claim that replacing the native-spoken
language
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 with global
languages
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 brings many disadvantages.
Firstly
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, The native-spoken
language
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 is the link between the past and now. It keeps
people
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’s relations with their
culture
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 and knowledge of the ancient.
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, there are some ways to protect against
this
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 problem like interpreting important books in international
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.
Secondly
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, the beauty of our
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 is its diversity. The expansion of some specific
languages
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 might destroy many aspects of the local
culture
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.
This
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 leads to a change from many interesting diverse cultures to a boring integrated
culture
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. Other
people
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 believe that,
on the other hand
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, there are much more advantages to the development of widely spoken
languages
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such
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 as English, Spanish, and Mandarin. On the top, communication among many parts of the
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 becomes easier. There is no need to learn many
languages
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 or use an interpreter
instead
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people
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 can communicate and live everywhere by speaking one or maybe two
languages
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.
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, The cultural and religious difficulties among
people
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 can be solved by close understanding. It might lead to a decrease in conflicts and wars between countries. In conclusion, while the local
culture
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 and
language
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 are very crucial for many
people
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, global
language
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 can bring many benefits for all
people
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 around the
world
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. I believe that the most critical benefit is the one common spoken
language
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 among
people
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 of the
world
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 contributes to better understanding and peace.
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