ou need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away.

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Dear manager, I am writing

this

letter to you to inform you about my new situation which lead to asking for taking leave.

Firstly

, I should say I have an old grandmother who lives with me.

Last

week I found she could not eat any food, so, Set an appointment with her doctor, he said, she needed emergency surgery because of heart, so, I was staying since two days ago at the hospital.

On the other hand

, she had not any children I have to be accompanied her for one month. As you know, I am working in the accounting section. Currently, all documents are ready and I do not have any backlog tasks

therefore

, I can deliver my duty conveniently.

On the other hand

, I tried to learn all my duty from my colleague Roohi, fortunately, she has done

this

task before recent her promotion, so she knows all sections of transactions.and because of my situation, she accepts to do my task.

Finally

,Thank you for taking your time and your consideration of my letter. Yours faithfully, Salehi

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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