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It is important fo people to tke risks, both in their professional lives and their pesonal lives. Do you think the advantage of taking risks outweigh the disadventages?

#fo #people #tke #risks #lives #advantage #disadventages
There are many
steps
 in our life that need to make a decision whatever the kind of it. Some
people
 think that in some cases folk need to do some risky
steps
 to improve their theoretical lives and practical lives. I believe
this
 positive side far outweighs any potential disadvantages. All
people
 sometimes need to do some dangerous
steps
 to achieve success whenever either at work or in any other place. when
people
 ask for a promotion, they should be braver in taking advanced
steps
 even if these
steps
 are risky. For ,instance Elon musk 2008, had 50 million and he was so confused about if he should buy either Tesla or Space x companies in final he bought both of them because he decided to take the risk but now his companies are the most successful in the world so sometimes there are many changes need to take the potential of losing to do a huge thing.
On the other hand
, many individuals who take risks in their life,sometimes, lose many things because they don't have good planning and they like to improve their situation in a gradual way. For ,example if we look at the investment sector, there are many projects that failed because the owner of these projects took some dangerous action but
this
 , is not a big problem because we can avoid these things with good planning and we can offer many internships to learn the owner of the project how they can think before taking any risky
steps
. Overall, there are many views that may have good or negative but in my view many times,
people
 have to take the potential of any risk to improve their lives and
this
 can not happen without good thinking on top of that,
people
 can not take any advance step without good planning so in my ,opinion the pros of
this
 issue are better than cons.
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