International travel is becoming cheaper ad more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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problems because of obesity. It can be seen

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growth of overweight

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in society. There are several reasons for

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advertising campaigns. To fight

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obesity, some measures are needed to be taken by the

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and by ourselves. The

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reason for obesity is that many

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tend to have a sedentary lifestyle. Due to the development of technology, our

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been noticeably changed. In the past, we had to cycle or walk to work, whereas now we are able to choose from a wide variety of transport,

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as private vehicles and buses.

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are likely to watch TV or play computer games in front of screens to have fun and relax. The less physical activities they perform, the less healthy they are. Another reason for being increasingly overweight is that there are sorts of

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which encourage

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to opt for fast food

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of home-cooked meals. It is difficult for

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to reject advertised junk food

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as high-fat food and sugary drinks

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because advertising companies utilize different methods to glorify them and make them seductive.

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,

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are encouraged to have an unhealthy diet. In order to resolve

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problem, both the

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and

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should take

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to fight against it. On the one hand, the

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need to introduce laws to regulate the

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and pose taxes on several

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of junk foods.

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in some

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countries

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countries

increase the prices of sugary drinks. What's more, they are supposed to encourage

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to choose more healthy

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using public

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.

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should raise awareness of having a more active lifestyle,

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as doing physical activities, exercising regularly and

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more vegetables and fruits. In conclusion,

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unhealthy

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and the influence

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are two main reasons for being increasingly overweight. To resolve

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, both

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and

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themselves should take measures.