Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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of their own and
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by emotion and feeling about
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of movies and TV programmes being shown outside or not.Today,
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will discuss
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to the situation we are having here. The advantage of watching your
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entertainment outside is very convenient for a lot of
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because they can have a better
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of
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time in their own life without
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interupted
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another
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work.
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like
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cup or comedy
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On the other hand
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their own without the knowledge of the
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other things. To summarise, the main point is showing the outside the entertainment of the country have benefit and disadvantage.I mostly want to believe that movies and TV should show and spread around the
world
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural exchange
  • enriches
  • diverse perspectives
  • storytelling methods
  • spur creativity
  • innovation
  • genres
  • styles
  • over-reliance
  • undermine
  • overshadow
  • cultural homogenization
  • national identity
  • local talent
  • linguistic relevance
  • relatable
  • accessible
  • domestic audience
  • preserve
  • cultural identity
  • promote
  • balanced approach
  • cultural landscape
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