Obesity is a ticking time bomb which will cause healthcare cost to explode. To defuse this situation, all fast food advertising should be banned.

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who have excess weight. Because
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obesity is a ticking time bomb which will cause
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to explode.
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consider that all fast
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advertising should be banned in order to defuse
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essay. On the one hand,
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living style is becoming so busy day by day. Because of that
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don't have
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time to cook healthy
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time on their computer without physical movement. So,
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working condition can be one of the most important causes to gain weight.
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, there are many choices of
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which have too much nutrition. Most of those
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are delicious.
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, most
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, especially children like to have those
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, having
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fast food
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of the
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sides of fast
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choice for their health.
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fast
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advertising without
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knowing that fast
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is very
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harmful
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harmful
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