Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources ad money so computers should replace them.however others do not agree .Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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have

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dramatically

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changed

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changed

, including

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libraries

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by computers in many aspects, While others argue. In

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paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be examined in detail before

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a conclusion

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is reached.

To begin

with, there are numerous reasons why original

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libraries

will be replaced by

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technology

equipments

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equipment

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such

as computer gadgets.

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Initially

, Computers require a small space to install them.

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, some small communities that have

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land conditions could assist them to access the world of readings.

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the internet

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is a huge factor that can provide some individuals or some rural

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have

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equal opportunity to reach their learnings.

Secondly

, technology gadgets do not require a lot of

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or staff to

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charge

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charge

of

its

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operations. To illustrate, the owner does not hire

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staff to clean a place or keep books

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to its selves.

On the other hand

, reading books at

libraries

is always classic

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.

For instance

,

libraries

have been used for social

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by students or

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because of

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peaceful

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place

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.

Moreover

, the historic knowledge was established by books that contribute to a suitable place for learning history.

As a result

,

libraries

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circimstance

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circumstance

is the most effective

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why we should have

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actual

libraries

in each city. In conclusion, the government should take

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responsible for

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providing

prodiving

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providing

both actual

libraries

and computers for all communities.

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, all individuals should have

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equality to access all

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materials

meterials

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meters

that must be arranged by the authorities.