Mobile phones are considered essential by most people nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones

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nowadays mobile
phones
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are really a part of
humans
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day
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to
day
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life
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.we have to accept that.there is
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of mobile
phones
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are manufacturing by branded companies like apple,
samsung
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etc.each
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phones
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phone
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are different from the other one based on price,specifications,quality,brand and even colour and size,weight.so we can buy a mobile
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phone based
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on our
requirments
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requirements
. now we will see some advantages of
mobile
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the mobile
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phone
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.
recent
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days
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mobile
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phone
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phones
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are very useful for
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a teenager
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teenager
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teenagers
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to adults.teenagers used mobile
phones
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for
academic
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the academic
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purpose
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purposes
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for most.
becuase
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because
there is plenty of options are in it.we can download academic files through
internet
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the internet
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eventually
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tutors
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used
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gadgets
wisely for taking seminars,to take notes.
mobiles
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are mostly used for communication worldwide.in
this
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fastest technological world
humans
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need lots of communication.so they
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mobile
phones
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.from wakeup
at
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in
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morning
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to till sleep at night
mobiles
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are attached
with
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to
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humans
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.
its
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portable so we can easily take it wherever we go.
its
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very less weight to keep in our hands.easily
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chargeable
chargeble
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chargeable
.
very
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affordable to buy. now we will see the drawbacks of
humans
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because of mobile
phones
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.the usage of
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are
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keeps on increasing
day
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by
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.
accordingly
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humans
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are very lazy
because
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the usage of
mobiles
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.the wave of
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gadjets
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gadgets
in
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humans
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routine
life
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is on
peek
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now.on the other side we all
are keep
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on being lazier these
days
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moreover
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these
mobiles
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are
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affect the relationship between family,
friends
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and friends
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.because past
days
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of human
life
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is
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much different from
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today's
today
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human
life
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.in older
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all
are play
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together,work together,chatting together.but now all these things
done
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in
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on
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mobile
phones
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itself
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themselves
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finally
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from my point of view,
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gadjets
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gadgets
are
most
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a most
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welcomed thing but we need to know how to bring
it
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in
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our own
life
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.we need to set some limits for
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gadjets
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gadgets
.we have to separate mobile
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phone
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phones
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from our
life
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.
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gadjets
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gadgets
are playing the most
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important
iportant
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important
role in human
life
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,but it
nt
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not
to be like that.we can do
plethora
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a plethora
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of
works
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work
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by
ourself
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ourselves
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without using
mobiles
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and
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gadjets
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gadgets
.
its
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time to
wakup
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wakeup
wake up
humans
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otherwise
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it will be a dangerous start for
humans
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in the name of technology.
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