Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some locals that voluntary work can be an advantageous option for

teenagers

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serving their

community

could be an option. Personally speaking, I agree with the statement because in a

community

people have to work together if they want to live

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a high living standard. Working for their own

community

,

teenagers

could broaden their social skills and become aware of their role in

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society. During that time, those people could get along with some senior locals and exchange experiences,

for example

. It is

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the perfect way to start developing working skills when delivering the mail, walking pets for their

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/the elders,

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pools, to start with. These are some services that an

unexperienced

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teenager could get involved

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In

community

service,

teenagers

do not have to have previous experience and it is not a demanding job which

teenagers

could easily learn from and understand the value of working. If

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from one side, one can number lots of benefits,

on the other

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/side, some people can have

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against those kinds of jobs because they give the false impression that those who are serving the

community

are required to do so because they might have done something wrong or harmful to others, since these kinds of services are currently being used as punishment. Working for a

community

should not be a punishment in any circumstances. In conclusion, we can see that motivating a teenager to do voluntary work is a

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positive

posivite

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win-win attitude and, as

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of

this

kind of job,

community

leaders could invest their

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efforts

effords

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effort

in other important needs

such

as providing better

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and education structure in a feedback wheel.