Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve thsi problem?

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, in every shape and
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is harmful
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recent years, the utilization of
plastic
items has increased strikingly. The major/main reason for
this
problem is the new lifestyle of
people
all over the world. In
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essay, various aspects of
plastic
usage and their solutions to the
environment
will be discussed as well as examples will be given. On social media, lots of
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actions
are taken in an attempt to make
people
aware of their attitudes and the direct consequences that it could have
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our mother nature, like the
plastic
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overwhelming
the
seacost
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seacoast
sea cost
and hurting
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animals. Activists believe that if all
people
could make simple
actions
, starting by reducing our
plastic
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and denying
plastic
packages and bottles in
coffeeshops
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and restaurants,
for example
, those
actions
would be a good example and as result, could influence other
people
to join the cause. Thinking about the bigger picture, governments could invest in
a
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sustainable tourism by advising visitors to take an
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attitude and advice locals to recycle, reduce and reuse
plastic
by making advertisements with a sustainable approach and community leaders could clean rivers and the seacoast to make them more attractive to locals and tourists, they could
also
reward
people
who take
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actions
,
for example
. Wrapping up, both of them, individuals and governments should spend time and join hands in finding the best way to control the usage of
plastic
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doable and realistic, et goals and have common objectives until it
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something
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way.
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