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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve thsi problem?

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Plastic
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, in every shape and
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color
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 is harmful
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 the
environment
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 and in
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recent years, the utilization of
plastic
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 items has increased strikingly. The major/main reason for
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 problem is the new lifestyle of
people
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 all over the world. In
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 essay, various aspects of
plastic
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 usage and their solutions to the
environment
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 will be discussed as well as examples will be given. On social media, lots of
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environment friendly
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actions
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 are taken in an attempt to make
people
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 aware of their attitudes and the direct consequences that it could have
in
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 our mother nature, like the
plastic
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overwelming
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overwhelming
 the
seacost
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seacoast
sea cost
 and hurting
sealife
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sea life
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 animals. Activists believe that if all
people
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 could make simple
actions
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, starting by reducing our
plastic
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consume
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consumption
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 and denying
plastic
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 packages and bottles in
coffeeshops
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coffee shops
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 and restaurants,
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, those
actions
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 would be a good example and as result, could influence other
people
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 to join the cause. Thinking about the bigger picture, governments could invest in
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sustainable tourism by advising visitors to take an
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environment friendly
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 attitude and advice locals to recycle, reduce and reuse
plastic
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 by making advertisements with a sustainable approach and community leaders could clean rivers and the seacoast to make them more attractive to locals and tourists, they could
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 reward
people
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 who take
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actions
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,
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. Wrapping up, both of them, individuals and governments should spend time and join hands in finding the best way to control the usage of
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 things
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is
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 doable and realistic, et goals and have common objectives until it
become
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 something
aautomatic
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automatic
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 way.
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