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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

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Teachers always
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 an important role in everyone's
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, they help in building a successful career in every field.
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, a good
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 helps us to become
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good human
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 in
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society. Some people think that they can learn better by themselves rather than from a
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, some think that learning from the
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 is always better. As far as I am concerned, I would like to learn from a
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 than on our own. I think
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 way for two reasons, which I will explore in
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 essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that teachers are the source of inspiration and motivation for students and guides towards
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 path in
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, I remember, when I was in tenth class my favourite
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 was Mrs Madhu, she used to teach us math subjects and was very kind in nature. Whenever I had any questions regarding calculations she always clear my doubts immediately. Her way of clearing doubts always inspires and motivates me to do more hard work for solving any problem.
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, teachers have highly organised knowledge, they have the skills to make a difficult or complex topic into a simpler one, which is very significant and helpful in learning any subject.
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, when I was in the university in my final year
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 I got stuck in some project work. My
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 provided me
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 the required research papers, which was very much helpful to me in doing that project. I learned a lot from research papers and completed my project very easily. In conclusion, I believe that a good
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 always makes a difference in everyone's
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, on the positive side. They guide and make our
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 more progressive and beautiful.
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, I always prefer to have a
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 while learning new things in
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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