In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages to study abroad?

There is a significant rise in
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of undergraduates those who are studying in the other part of the world for their higher education.
Although
there will be a cultural,
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hindrance
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hindrances
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while abroad,they will get better career opportunities that will help in their future growth.In my
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the
students
should prefer to study in abroad
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in spite
inspite
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spite
of the troubles and challenges that they will experience inevitably.
First
of all, The crucial benefit is
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that
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they will get a chance to live in a new culture ,
atmosphere
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and atmosphere
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and socialising with
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new people .On top of that,they will get exposed to foreign
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and they should learn that inevitably.Because,when they live in a better environment ,
students
can build their determined path with
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a conscience
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.
For instance
,when
i
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lived in a country called
germany
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Germany
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for my
undergraduation
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undergraduate
under graduation
,I met so many
students
from different parts of the world .Not only it
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me in learning various types of cultures,
traditions
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and traditions
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but
also
in choosing
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the better
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path to excel in my career.
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to new cultures and
language
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languages
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it helps you to grow as an intellectual person.
On the other hand
,The major disadvantage the
students
should face is the
lingustic
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linguistic
,communicational barriers.
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it will be expensive to study
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abroad.Because
,
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It is not possible to afford
such
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amount of money for middle-class families.
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,Without knowing their
language
it is impossible to build
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communication bridge with them.For
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example
,When
i
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was in
germany
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Germany
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i
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had to learn
german
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the german
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language
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to communicate with them smoothly and fluently.Often times
i
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have felt low self-esteem to speak with them in their native
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language
langauge
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language
. Long back,
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students
used to finish their education
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their own country.
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the past few years, We are witnessing a huge increase in the number of outgoing
students
for their higher education.
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it is costly to go abroad,
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it will be
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beneficial
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beneficial
for their career growth.I believe that
to get
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educated
in
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abroad helps in
building
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the building
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of
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self-esteem in the student while abroad,
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the student
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student
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should face
the
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challenges inevitably.
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