Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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been
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evolved in the
last
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fifty years, from bullock carts to
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to cars and buses. During
this
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period,
usage
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of
bicycles
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is minimised despite the health benefits.In
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essay, I will look
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at the reasons and
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highlight how to encourage
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bicycles
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usage
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with appropriate examples. To start with, in most countries urban roads remain the same and it is almost congested with private and public vehicles,
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no space for
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riders,
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putting
cyclist
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at risk.Recently road and safety
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released statistics on accidents highlighting cyclist is the most vulnerable to hit and run cases.The other reason,per-capita income has increased,influencing laymen for choosing two or
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four-wheelers
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four wheelers
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instead
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of a
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. Nowadays, having two or
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is acting as a status symbol,neglecting
health
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benefits
by
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using
bicycles
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. To increase the
usage
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of
bicycle
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,
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,separate cycle lane
need
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to create which is well connected with the city centres and other important places with the shortest route, away from the main roads.
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will give immense security to cyclists.
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,a government initiative is needed where buyers can purchase
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on
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the subsidised rate along with the tax relief.
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, health policies should be interlinked with the
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of
the
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pedal bikes.
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, leading insurance organisation comes with
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incentive plans, wherein users can get loyalty points for every kilometre ride by
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bicycle
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but pedal bikes should have a GPS tracker.Fourth, the government should increase taxes on buying
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motorcycles or cars.
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, in Denmark, heavy taxes on
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vehicles
which
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discourage buyers,
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result
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the preferred mode of commuting through pedal bikes,
the
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highest in the world. In conclusion, stating the reasons followed by the ways to increase
the
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bicycle
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usage
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, people have to understand the benefits and the consequences of
sedentary
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a sedentary
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lifestyle.
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