Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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evolved in the

last

fifty years, from bullock carts to

bicycles

to cars and buses. During

this

period,

usage

of

bicycles

is minimised despite the health benefits.In

this

essay, I will look

firstly

at the reasons and

then

highlight how to encourage

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usage

with appropriate examples. To start with, in most countries urban roads remain the same and it is almost congested with private and public vehicles,

therefore

no space for

bicycle

riders,

also

putting

cyclist

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cyclists

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at risk.Recently road and safety

NGO

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released statistics on accidents highlighting cyclist is the most vulnerable to hit and run cases.The other reason,per-capita income has increased,influencing laymen for choosing two or

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four wheelers

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instead

of a

bicycle

. Nowadays, having two or

four wheelers

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is acting as a status symbol,neglecting

health

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benefits

by

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using

bicycles

. To increase the

usage

of

bicycle

,

first

,separate cycle lane

need

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to create which is well connected with the city centres and other important places with the shortest route, away from the main roads.

This

will give immense security to cyclists.

Second

,a government initiative is needed where buyers can purchase

bicycles

on

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the subsidised rate along with the tax relief.

Third

, health policies should be interlinked with the

usage

of

the

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pedal bikes.

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incentive plans, wherein users can get loyalty points for every kilometre ride by

the

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bicycle

but pedal bikes should have a GPS tracker.Fourth, the government should increase taxes on buying

the

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motorcycles or cars.

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, in Denmark, heavy taxes on

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vehicles

which

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discourage buyers,

as a

result

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the preferred mode of commuting through pedal bikes,

the

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highest in the world. In conclusion, stating the reasons followed by the ways to increase

the

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bicycle

usage

, people have to understand the benefits and the consequences of

sedentary

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a sedentary

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lifestyle.