The television is good for you. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.
Television
was invented in 20th
century, and Change the article
the 20th
thereafter
it has evolved multiple times from bulky to flat televisions. Lots of entertainment content is created which can be telecast on television
.In this
essay,I will look firstly
at advantages
and Correct article usage
the advantages
then
highlight disadvantages with the appropriate examples.
First
,television
is a good source of current affairs where information can reach to
viewers quickly and easily.Anyone who is watching Change preposition
apply
news
channel on Correct article usage
the news
television
and
Correct word choice
apply
get
to know what is happening around him/her. Change the verb form
gets
For
example
, I can see the activities of Lok Sabha happening in New Delhi through live-telecast
on Correct your spelling
live telecast
the
Correct article usage
apply
TV
. Second
, there are multiple channels available on TV
which can help students to revise their school courses. For
example
,when I was student
Add an article
a student
of
12th class, I used to watch Change preposition
in
Gyan
channel, a government initiative Correct article usage
the Gyan
program
which was aligned on
NCERT 12th class curriculum.
Change preposition
with
On the contrary
, television
has a dark side too.There are many channels running useless and baseless programs in the name of entertainment.For
example
, Shinchan is a cartoon program
where notorious
Correct article usage
a notorious
character
do all awful activities but kids are amused Fix the agreement mistake
characters
with
his behaviour and Change preposition
by
deceptive
them.If there is no restriction on children Replace the word
deceive
for
watching Change preposition
from
Correct your spelling
television
televisiov
Correct your spelling
television
,
Remove the comma
apply
than
they will prefer Correct your spelling
then
TV
over the
physical games.Correct article usage
apply
For
example
, my daughter spends most of her time watching cartoons, and as parents
we Add a comma
,parents
didnot
know when she became addicted to itCorrect your spelling
did not
didn't
,
and stopped playing outside. when realised, we start putting Remove the comma
apply
restriction
on watching Add an article
a restriction
tv
, and it was hard for her but now she is on track and spend
minimal time on Change the verb form
spends
idiot
box.
In conclusion,it is wise to choose and decide what Add an article
the idiot
program
a person can look,and
evaluate whether Change preposition
at and
chosen
Add an article
the chosen
a chosen
program
will be knowledgeable or it a
Add a missing verb
is a
time killing
.Add a hyphen
time-killing
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