The television is good for you. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

Television
was invented in
20th
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century, and
thereafter
it has evolved multiple times from bulky to flat televisions. Lots of entertainment content is created which can be telecast on
television
.In
this
essay,I will look
firstly
at
advantages
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and
then
highlight disadvantages with the appropriate examples.
First
,
television
is a good source of current affairs where information can reach
to
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viewers quickly and easily.Anyone who is watching
news
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the news
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channel on
television
and
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get
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to know what is happening around him/her.
For
example
, I can see the activities of Lok Sabha happening in New Delhi through
live-telecast
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on
the
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TV
.
Second
, there are multiple channels available on
TV
which can help students to revise their school courses.
For
example
,when I was
student
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a student
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of
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12th class, I used to watch
Gyan
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the Gyan
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channel, a government initiative
program
which was aligned
on
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NCERT 12th class curriculum.
On the contrary
,
television
has a dark side too.There are many channels running useless and baseless programs in the name of entertainment.
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example
, Shinchan is a cartoon
program
where
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character
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characters
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do all awful activities but kids are amused
with
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his behaviour and
deceptive
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them.If there is no restriction on children
for
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watching
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television
televisiov
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television
,
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than
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then
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they will prefer
TV
over
the
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physical games.
For
example
, my daughter spends most of her time watching cartoons, and as
parents
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we
didnot
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did not
didn't
know when she became addicted to it
,
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and stopped playing outside. when realised, we start putting
restriction
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on watching
tv
, and it was hard for her but now she is on track and
spend
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minimal time on
idiot
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the idiot
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box. In conclusion,it is wise to choose and decide what
program
a person can look,
and
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evaluate whether
chosen
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the chosen
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program
will be knowledgeable or it
a
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time killing
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informed
  • awareness
  • educational programs
  • skills
  • entertainment
  • relaxation
  • prolonged
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • obesity
  • eye strain
  • mental well-being
  • violent content
  • productivity
  • stereotypes
  • unrealistic expectations
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