You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in regards to the job posting for a caretaker in Australia. My name is Tushar and I am currently working with the 'early tree' child care agency for the

last

2 years, I love to take care of kids and play with them because my childhood was a bit rough and when I am around children I feel good and I always try to live myself through them. I believe that I acquire all the skills that are required for

this

position. I have done 'Early childhood program' at Georgian college with honours.

Moreover

, I have had a wonderful experience dealing with children of different age groups.

In addition

, I am willing to commute and I can easily adjust myself to other people and their requirements. After work, I have planned to spend my leisure time visiting places around and exploring the new culture,

also

a very close friend of mine lives a 15 minutes drive from downtown so I will be visiting her once a week. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Tushar

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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