In many countries school have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the causes of this, what solution can you suggest.

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In today's, world many institutions are facing

this

issue with the behaviour of students and

this

is because of several reasons in

this

passage I'll be talking

first

about some reasons and

then

the solution to reduce the problem. To start the

first

reason for students to behave inappropriately is due to lack of parental advice which means taking less care about what children do might cause

this

issue. The

second

reason is the influence that the kid gets from society and from what they see or watch

for instance

these days kids are watching more movies which contain fights and consuming toxic stuff due to

this

teenagers are getting more influenced and behaving like them. The

third

and final reason is some kids hate going to school

for example

If a kid likes the P.T period and doesn't like the maths period

then

the behaviour of the kid will be different when those classes start. To reduce these problems the parents should have good care over their children like what they are doing daily

moreover

they need to spend some time with them so they can know more about what they feel about school. The

step is the style of teaching by the teachers should change like they need to make the subject more interesting by getting more interaction with them

additionally

movies or films need to show fewer fights and toxic subjects which can influence teenagers. To conclude

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Correct your spelling

controlling

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In many countries school have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the causes of this, what solution can you suggest.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Health experts claim that walking is known to be beneficial to health. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage people to walk more again?

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