In many countries school have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the causes of this, what solution can you suggest.

In today's, world many institutions are facing
this
issue with the behaviour of students and
this
is because of several reasons in
this
passage I'll be talking
first
about some reasons and
then
the solution to reduce the problem. To start the
first
reason for students to behave inappropriately is due to lack of parental advice which means taking less care about what children do might cause
this
issue. The
second
reason is the influence that the kid gets from society and from what they see or watch
for instance
these days kids are watching more movies which contain fights and consuming toxic stuff due to
this
teenagers are getting more influenced and behaving like them. The
third
and final reason is some kids hate going to school
for example
If a kid likes the P.T period and doesn't like the maths period
then
the behaviour of the kid will be different when those classes start. To reduce these problems the parents should have good care over their children like what they are doing daily
moreover
they need to spend some time with them so they can know more about what they feel about school. The
next
step is the style of teaching by the teachers should change like they need to make the subject more interesting by getting more interaction with them
additionally
movies or films need to show fewer fights and toxic subjects which can influence teenagers. To conclude
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Correct your spelling
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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