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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couple deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

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In many
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 it has become the latest trend that
people
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 who are married do not want to become parents.
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without having
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 couples can achieve more life goals,there is a risk of social isolation for them. The main benefit of not having
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 is that married
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 can go after their dreams without any obstacles.
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young
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 who are married have several life goals
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 as
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 education,career prospectives,or more social services.These may not be able to achieve with the
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, because they have to spend more time and money to look after their
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 latest study done by a charity organization in the UK revealed that most
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married individuals
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achieved the most success in their professions and do not have any
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,the downside of not having
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 is the risk of social isolation in their older ages.
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 is because poor physical and mental instability is inevitably entwined with ageing.So individuals need someone who
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an elderly lives
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.There are no garrets that a married partner will be with them for their lifelong.But, if have a child they may keep in touch with their parents forever.
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 can have
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 quality of elderly living with their
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 and grandchildren.
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 ,they will end up with a lonely life in an elderly care home.
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, research done by the University of Sidney proved that,in Australia ,80 per cent of older
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live in adult homes and do not have
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. In conclusion,there is a gradual rise of married couples deciding not to have
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there is a probability of isolation in society during their later lives,
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 who do not have
children
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 can achieve more success or more goals without any obstacles.
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