‘Social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter are observed to have more negative effects than positive being more useful for the criminals than others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.’
Social networking
sites
such
as Facebook and Twitter are accounting to have more negative impacts than its positives, mostly being useful
for criminals than other members. Correct quantifier usage
more useful
However
, I believe in the same. This
essay discuss
supporting explanations and reasons for Change the verb form
discusses
this
phenomenon.
To begin
with, initially
, social media influencing
youth the most. We are witnessing Wrong verb form
influences
increasing
number of influencers on these Change the article
an increasing
the increasing
sites
, by
actively Correct pronoun usage
who by
involving
in reels. Wrong verb form
involved
Moreover
, they give access to their personal information and pictures, thus
criminals take a chance to rob the details, which they further
use for their activities. For instance
, recently I heard a
news about a famous social celebrity, whose pictures were robbed and posted on one Correct article usage
apply
of
the porn Change preposition
apply
sites
. Not only Fix the agreement mistake
site
this
,
but many cases of blackmailing Remove the comma
apply
has
been registered, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
as a result
of overusing of
Change preposition
apply
such
platforms. Recent studies reveal that,
Remove the comma
apply
number
of complaints registering on Correct article usage
the number
such
issues experiencing
Wrong verb form
experienced
gradual
increase Correct article usage
a gradual
by
time to time.
Change preposition
from
Lastly
, law breakers
are getting effortless access to, how to commit a crime, what will be consequences, how to escape from it, if caught,Correct your spelling
lawbreakers
how
to manage, all Correct word choice
and how
such
information. Even though,
they do not have Remove the comma
apply
intention
to get into trouble, Change the article
the intention
these
stuff gives Change the determiner
this
urge
to do. Change the article
the urge
Besides
, even innocent individuals are turning into
violent, by watching Change preposition
apply
such
things. For example
, recently a news
Remove the article
news
a piece of news
telecasted
Replace the word
telecast
in
one of the popular channels, revealed that Change preposition
on
ample
number of incidents happening by watching youtube videos. Change the article
an ample
the ample
This
is a tremendous scenario,Correct word choice
and
as a
result
bothers society as a whole.
To conclude, I agree with the given statement. Add the comma(s)
,result
Significant
increase in using social networking Correct article usage
A significant
sites
is creating numerous ways to involve in criminal activities like blackmailing, murders
as well as morphing photographs and circulating them.Correct word choice
and murders
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