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Nowadays The Differences Between Countries Are Becoming Less Evident Because People Follow The Same Media

These days,
people
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 across the countries spend a lot of time on the internet and follow common trends and events that make them less different from one another. There are some advantages to sharing the same views and interests;
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, loss of culture and original identity could be a drastic result of
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 trend. In my opinion, there are more negative aspects to
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 development. To start with the advantages, sharing a global
media
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 platform to connect with
people
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 worldwide brings
people
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 closer.
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, anything
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 trending on the internet is picked by
people
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 quickly, and when all of them follow the same
media
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 they feel connected.
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, in recent times, a lot of
people
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 around the world have expressed their support for the LGBTQ community, irrespective of what their local community follows and believes in.
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, following the same
media
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 has helped
people
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 to come together.
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, we are slowly losing out on our unique identity and culture. Sharing a single
media
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 platform often results in the devaluation of local customs and beliefs that are not globally accepted. Our uniqueness is mainly defined by our language, clothing, and way of living, and of all these are losing out to the global common trends and practices shared on the internet
media
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.
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, it puts more emphasis on global issues than immediate local issues.
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, a country might be going through severe water scarcity;
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, the majority of its citizens would not even consider
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 as an urgent issue because the common
media
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 might not have even addressed it. In conclusion, it is advantageous to be connected with
people
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 across the world and share common interests and beliefs through online
media
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. The big disadvantage could be the loss of cultural and regional practices that make us unique. Completely following the same
media
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 can erode our originality and
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 could have major implications on our society irrespective of its advantages.
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, it has more negative impacts.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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