One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in a new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's business offer. In your letter - give your opinion of your frien's business idea - tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer - and explain yor reasons for this decision.

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Dear Amie, I hope you're well.
First
of all, congratulations on your new start! I'
m
just writing in response to your offer of being your business partner. I was really happy to know that you're
finally
going to start your own venture since you've been giving it a thought for quite a long time. I'
m
sure your clothing line will do great business as I'
m
aware of your amazing choice of clothes. I've gone through the business idea in detail, and I can tell it has the potential to grow provided that you put special focus on marketing and advertising. You'll be delighted to know that I'
m
willing to accept your offer. In fact, I was wondering what took you so long to put it into action as you had the idea in your mind when we were doing our graduation. I can surely tell that we'll have a blast working together because we make a perfect team, and we certainly have the potential to conquer the world. I feel I'
m
fit for the partnership because I'
m
into fashion and stuff.
Besides
that, I did my master's in Advertising and Public Relations from Delhi University, and I have two years of experience in the same field. I guess I can handle your marketing team very well. I was anyway thinking of quitting
this
boring job of mine, and your offer came in at the right time. Let's catch up really soon to discuss it in detail. Warm wishes, Garry
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