One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in a new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's business offer. In your letter - give your opinion of your frien's business idea - tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer - and explain yor reasons for this decision.

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Dear Amie, I hope you're well.

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of all, congratulations on your new start! I'

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just writing in response to your offer of being your business partner. I was really happy to know that you're

finally

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going to start your own venture since you've been giving it a thought for quite a long time. I'

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sure your clothing line will do great business as I'

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aware of your amazing choice of clothes. I've gone through the business idea in detail, and I can tell it has the potential to grow provided that you put special focus on marketing and advertising. You'll be delighted to know that I'

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willing to accept your offer. In fact, I was wondering what took you so long to put it into action as you had the idea in your mind when we were doing our graduation. I can surely tell that we'll have a blast working together because we make a perfect team, and we certainly have the potential to conquer the world. I feel I'

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fit for the partnership because I'

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into fashion and stuff.

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that, I did my master's in Advertising and Public Relations from Delhi University, and I have two years of experience in the same field. I guess I can handle your marketing team very well. I was anyway thinking of quitting

this

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boring job of mine, and your offer came in at the right time. Let's catch up really soon to discuss it in detail. Warm wishes, Garry

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

249 words

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