IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 1.5

Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. Causes and solutions

#influence #beings #worlds #ecosystem #extinction #species #loss #biodiversity
Since the
second
 industrial revolution, humanity has witnessed an increase in the destruction of ecosystems, with several species across the globe teetering on the edge of extinction.
Although
 the current situation is alarming, there are several solutions that can be put in place to at least reduce
this
frightly
Correct your spelling
rightly
brightly
 process. One of the main
cause
Fix the agreement mistake
causes
show examples
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
 deforestation and other non-friendly environmental actions is economic greed. Individuals are interested in
profiting
Change the form of the verb
profit
show examples
 at any cost. There
several
Add a missing verb
are several
show examples
 reasons for
this
 situation and causes are profits particularly real state businesses (mining and agriculture ) # solutions - more regulatory laws and enverimontaly friend solutions
such
 as
Submitted by mayara_bastos on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: