people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?

It is true that the development of technology makes communication between people easier and the world has become a small village,

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individuals all over the globe have the choices to work and live wherever they want, I totally believe that the merits of

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outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, the business market gains more qualified employees, When any company needs to hire workers, all it has to do is to create an online

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for a job and

then

select from the possible candidates, the best for the job vacant.

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, the job seekers have a wide opportunity to choose between a place of work and another regardless

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he lives,

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,

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can move easily and be in contact with

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family even

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works overseas,

thus

, there is no limit for both sides to has a certain choice because of place and time.

On the other hand

, some people argue that the local market is affected by

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globalization,

for instance

, the national companies

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skilled members because they choose to work overseas

instead

of being inside,

however

,

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opinion should be taken into our consideration, I believe that rules must be imposed here to organize the process,

for example

, there must be

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regulations

to protect both local market and worker's freedom.

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participating

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culture

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may be hard at the beginning, it

also

makes us obtain more experiences and learn new languages and habits. In

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conclusion

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, even though,

this

fast

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development

develpoment

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development

brought both positives and negatives, it is clear that

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outweigh the

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disadvantages

disadvantges

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disadvantages

.