Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, due to the rapid development of technology more people including younger ones spend their
time
on computers. This
essay will discuss some reasons and also
will shed light on the pros and cons of this
development in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are some reasons for using mobile phones
. Firstly
, it becomes easier to purchase mobile phones
. It is available at affordable prices so parents buy them a mobile phone. Secondly
, these days both parents are working so children feel lonely so parents buy them to spend time
on mobile phones
. They can communicate with their friends and relatives. Moreover
, they also
use mobile phones
to play video games. Now, it also
helps them in their studies. For instance
, during COVID, schools were closed and the study was online so they spend time
on smartphones. Furthermore
, children also
use mobile phones
for online shopping and ordering food from online food apps such
as Zomato.
There are some advantages and disadvantages of this
development. I believe that if students use it for a limited amount of time
then
this
is really beneficial otherwise
it generates health and social issues. Firstly
, using mobile phones
for study purposes, and online shopping is
really beneficial. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
On the other hand
, if students spend more hours in a day on mobile phones
it generates some health issues such
as short-sightedness, and obesity. Students also
become less social they become more introverts.
To conclude, I believe that technology is a boon for everyone. If pupils spend limited time
on smartphones to study or communicate with friends is really beneficial otherwise
there are multiple health issues.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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