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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All leveld of education, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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Everyone should have equal rights to get an
education
 doesn't matter if they are rich or poor. but proper schooling is getting out of hand for low-paid
communities
 because of high tuition fees these days. In my notion, all levels of
education
 should be free for people so all can get good coaching and live a standard life.
To begin
 with, in the
last
 few years schooling is getting very expensive day by day.
Therefore
, the poverty community is struggling to provide good
education
 to their children as they are not able to afford high tuition fees.
Furthermore
, Private academies and institutions are on fire to increase their fees and their course books asking to buy are very expensive. For all these reasons, the common man is not able to admit their children to those universities. Government and individuals should work to provide free learning to those low-paid
communities
.
However
, Government schools are doing good these days but according to the growing population, they are not able to handle all of the population.
Thus
, governments should come up with a good policy for these private institutes to control their fee.
Secondly
, the government should open new schools in slum areas for poor people to provide free schooling to their children. To conclude,
education
 should be the fourth mandatory amenity for all
communities
 after food shelter and clothes. Everyone should have the equal right to get a school and higher
education
 and live a standard life. In my opinion, governments need to work to provide free
education
 to all
communities
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessible
  • economic backgrounds
  • tertiary education
  • equal opportunities
  • workforce
  • innovation
  • social cohesion
  • class divide
  • government budgets
  • compromised quality
  • investment
  • future earnings
  • global competition
  • implementation
  • funding
  • administration
  • infrastructure
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