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Today more countires import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the adventages and disadvantages of this trend. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Now a days
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 we are living in a globalized era,
it
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which
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 has a profound impact on all areas
especially
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 on the import and export of
food
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 items. A fair amount of
countries
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 are adopting edible items from other nations. It has both
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positive
postive
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positive
 and negative
effect
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effects
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 not only on
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country
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the country
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 but
also
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 on the citizen in that
country
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. On the one hand , a great number of nations are interested in importing
food
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 products which are endemic to other places.
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 , people in that
country
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 get the opportunity to consume a variety of
foods
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 from other nations. Because of the
,
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globalization
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 all
food
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 products from other
countries
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 are available in our local stores these days.
For instance
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, the
Malasian
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Malaysian
 apple is a rare type of fruit which is indigenous to
Malasia
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Malaysia
 is always available in many
the
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apply
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Indian supermarkets recently.
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, people have the opportunity to explore
foods
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 from outside the
country
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.
On the other hand
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 , importing edible items from other
countries
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 has an adverse effect on the traditional
food
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 manufacturing business. As a consequence, the local manufacturing business will decline.
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 , research conducted by the
food
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 and drug association
hs
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has
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 found that many people are interested in purchasing
foods
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 from other
countries
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 than traditional
foods
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. It has a significant effect on the economy of that
country
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. To conclude , now we are living in a world market ,
food
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 from other places is easily available at any time and anywhere. It is advantageous to some extent but has a negative impact too.
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