Today more countires import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the adventages and disadvantages of this trend. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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we are living in a globalized era,
it
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which
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has a profound impact on all areas
especially
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on the import and export of
food
items. A fair amount of
countries
are adopting edible items from other nations. It has both
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positive
postive
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positive
and negative
effect
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effects
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not only on
country
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the country
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but
also
on the citizen in that
country
. On the one hand , a great number of nations are interested in importing
food
products which are endemic to other places.
As a result
, people in that
country
get the opportunity to consume a variety of
foods
from other nations. Because of the
,
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globalization
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all
food
products from other
countries
are available in our local stores these days.
For instance
, the
Malasian
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Malaysian
apple is a rare type of fruit which is indigenous to
Malasia
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Malaysia
is always available in many
the
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Indian supermarkets recently.
Therefore
, people have the opportunity to explore
foods
from outside the
country
.
On the other hand
, importing edible items from other
countries
has an adverse effect on the traditional
food
manufacturing business. As a consequence, the local manufacturing business will decline.
For example
, research conducted by the
food
and drug association
hs
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has
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found that many people are interested in purchasing
foods
from other
countries
than traditional
foods
. It has a significant effect on the economy of that
country
. To conclude , now we are living in a world market ,
food
from other places is easily available at any time and anywhere. It is advantageous to some extent but has a negative impact too.
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