Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrette. In your letter: suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I hope
this
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letter finds you well. I am writing to you in response to the advertisement in which you needed someone to help for a few hours
next
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summer. I, Kuljeet Kaur, residing nearby locality, writing to make an enquiry if you still need a helper at home. I can provide you with the facility of a helper and I can do every household task whether it is cooking or cleaning.
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, I am having experience dealing with children too. I can do babysitting for your kids too. Currently, I am in a dire need of funds due to my education.
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, I want to do some part-time work so that I can pay the annual fees of the educational institute on time. I can render my services in the evening from 4 pm to 7 pm. Apart from
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, I'm
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available during the morning time.
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, I'm not able to come from 12 noon to 3 pm due to my classes.
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, it would be really commendable if you could provide me with
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opportunity. Looking forward to hearing a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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