People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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for
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hygiene
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guaranteed
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. Another way to get healthy is to get Correct your spelling
guaranteed
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a medical
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check-up
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a minimum
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recommendation
bodies
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body's
bodies'
condition
and can have preventive action.
In conclusion, some people
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get attention to their Change the verb form
do not
did not
health
condition
because they argue that they have no time to work
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work out
workout
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apply
medical
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a medical
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checkups
instead
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bills after we get Change the noun form
hospital
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illness
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an ilness
ilness
.Correct your spelling
illness
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