Your local newspaper published an advertisement asking people to help with environmental projects in your area. Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help. In your letter: - describe a local environmental issue that affects you - explain what you would like to do to help - suggest how the problem could be avoided in the future

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the advertisement published in Delhi Times yesterday. I would like to volunteer for the Society Cleaning Drive. I am a resident of Uday Colony.

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of all, I would like to thank you for initiating the environmental projects as I believe it is high time to take necessary actions. Littering in

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society is an issue that greatly affects me. It is hard to understand why people find it difficult to throw garbage in dustbins. I would like to come forward and help with the initiative of collecting waste from our locality. Since I am free on the weekends, I would like to take part in the cleanliness drive

that is

conducted every Sunday morning. It is extremely unlikely that

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habit of people can be changed overnight but we can at least spread awareness. In my opinion, we should conduct rallies and should put other informative campaigns into action.

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, we should write to the regional authority to implement some strict policies against people who litter and should impose

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on anyone caught doing so. I hope I will hear from you soon and I am more than willing to help. Yours faithfully, Jay Arora

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