Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable now that many businesses are depended on online meetings and video conferences

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of following the traditional

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as being at offices the whole

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. It has become more recommended nowadays,

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, I believe that the merits

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issue outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, from an economic view, employers can save

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and money by using online

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to arrange and manage their work and making contact with their employees,

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example

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Zoom website has these features that

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allow

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individuals

to create their own

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and to contact others at any

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they wish.

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, both trainers and tutors can attend their

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courses

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online and they do not need to move from place to place anymore.

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some people are not interested in online

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, they use it during Covid

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, when they were forced to stay home.

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, there are many voices calling that they do not have

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opportunity to gain the benefits from online system, many businesses

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hand working,

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, they need

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actual meetings and training,

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, the construction firms need to test or to hire new electricians or plumbers,

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, checking and approving finished project or buildings.

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should be taken into our consideration, they can let

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step to the end of the plan and

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modern

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as diagrams and digital technology to get their tasks and plans done. these

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fit our age and the world we live

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. In conclusion, to judge

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approach we have to consider both sides,

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, the advantages always outweigh the disadvantages, and the results show

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clearly