Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in the letter to draw your attention that the
badminton
place is needed in our local
sports
centre
. I am Leona and living near vld ave. I have two children. My kids like
badminton
class and
also
in primary school
this
sport has been included since
this
year.
Although
there is a football stadium for people in the local
sports
centre
, I want to practise
badminton
skills with my children. Since doing
this
exercise, my family has become very harmonious.
Also
,
this
sport helps my family to have a healthy body. It is a great way to release stress and give fun. But when my family want to play
badminton
, we have to go to other regions that are too far from our local area.
In addition
, I asked about the
badminton
place should be in our local
sports
centre
for adults as well as very younger people. Most people said the
badminton
place should be there. Sir, I would like to suggest our local
sports
centre
should have a
badminton
space for adults as well as kids. I would really appreciate it if you could accept
this
suggestion. I firmly believe that
this
sport helps us for being a healthful local community. Sincerely, Leona
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