Genetic engineering is an important issue in society. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it might be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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willingness
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the willingness
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information
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the Change preposition
on
internet
. In my opinion, conventional
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the conventional
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newspapers
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support
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paper based
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paper-based
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newspapers
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people
and someday it
will be extinct.
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the internet
for
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in
the
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lifestyle. Change noun form
society's
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a new
IOT
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IoT
internet
of things). In Correct your spelling
IoT
IOT
era, most of Correct article usage
the IOT
activity
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the activity
people
around the world. Nowadays more people
gather information
and news
from online media
because of not only convenience but also
affordability. Moreover
, a lot of e-news
offer the information
free of charge. It caused online news
become
more and more popular, whereas the conventional one become inferior and almost extinct.
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, newspaper
readers are dominant from people
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millennials
news
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a newspaper
the newspaper
newspaper
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readers
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be lost
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the end
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news
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such
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to shift
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newspapers
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.
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