Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement in transportation and communication technologies. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon

Urbanization

becomes faster and wider nowadays. There has been a surge in

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community

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communities

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leaving their hometowns for reaching a better life in urban.

As a result

of rapid

urbanization

, a lot of

population

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the population

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left their occupations in the countryside. The rural

area

as a base of production of agricultural products

such

as vegetables, rice, fruit, and grain, becomes less populated. Meanwhile, urban

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and big

city

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cities

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become more crowded. In the long term, it will bring unfavourable impact both for the village and

city

.

Government

and society have to take serious action to stop the unplanned migration. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate

the

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effect of

this

phenomenon and provide a way

out

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to reduce

this

trend. Many negative impacts are caused by rapid

urbanization

. For destination

city

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cities

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, the population will become more crowded. People tend to experience higher competition in order to get an appropriate life. Space for a living gets more expensive and unreachable for some citizens. Meanwhile, the workforce decreased in the original

area

that was left by the workforce who decided to move to the

city

. It caused a lack of labour in agricultural-related fields in the village. The agricultural commodities will drop and lead to a mismatch between supply and demand in

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farming products

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. Supply of rice, fruit, vegetable, and grain will be scarce and the price will soar.

Government

should put

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of

this

phenomenon. There are some solutions that can be provided to prevent massive

urbanization

in the future.

First

, the

government

must allocate a sufficient budget to develop the rural

area

. The development of the rural

area

will provide tons of new work fields for people in the village so the villagers don't have to come to

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in order to get the appropriate occupations. Another solution that can be constructed by

government

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the government

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is

incentive

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an incentive

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.

Government

can give

incentive

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incentives

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for improving agriculture/farming industries in

the

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rural

area

. The scheme can be a subsidy of farming tools and materials or can be a workshop/educational program to improve the knowledge and skills of the farmer. The cooperation and commitment of

government

and society can reduce rapid migration by providing more work fields and improving farming industries in rural.