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Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement in transportation and communication technologies. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon

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Urbanization
 becomes faster and wider nowadays. There has been a surge in
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the community
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community
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communities
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 leaving their hometowns for reaching a better life in urban.
As a result
 of rapid
urbanization
, a lot of
population
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the population
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 left their occupations in the countryside. The rural
area
 as a base of production of agricultural products
such
 as vegetables, rice, fruit, and grain, becomes less populated. Meanwhile, urban
area
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areas
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 and big
city
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cities
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 become more crowded. In the long term, it will bring unfavourable impact both for the village and
city
.
Government
 and society have to take serious action to stop the unplanned migration. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate
the
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 effect of
this
 phenomenon and provide a way
out
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to reduce
this
 trend. Many negative impacts are caused by rapid
urbanization
. For destination
city
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cities
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, the population will become more crowded. People tend to experience higher competition in order to get an appropriate life. Space for a living gets more expensive and unreachable for some citizens. Meanwhile, the workforce decreased in the original
area
 that was left by the workforce who decided to move to the
city
. It caused a lack of labour in agricultural-related fields in the village. The agricultural commodities will drop and lead to a mismatch between supply and demand in
a farming products
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farming products
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. Supply of rice, fruit, vegetable, and grain will be scarce and the price will soar.
Government
 should put
awareness
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 of
this
 phenomenon. There are some solutions that can be provided to prevent massive
urbanization
 in the future.
First
, the
government
 must allocate a sufficient budget to develop the rural
area
. The development of the rural
area
 will provide tons of new work fields for people in the village so the villagers don't have to come to
city
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 in order to get the appropriate occupations. Another solution that can be constructed by
government
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the government
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 is
incentive
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an incentive
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.
Government
 can give
incentive
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 for improving agriculture/farming industries in
the
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rural
area
. The scheme can be a subsidy of farming tools and materials or can be a workshop/educational program to improve the knowledge and skills of the farmer. The cooperation and commitment of
government
 and society can reduce rapid migration by providing more work fields and improving farming industries in rural.
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