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Do you think the trend of buying new clothes is positive or negative?

#trend #clothes
Fashion is becoming more and more important in choosing new designed
clothes
 and accessories. It is true that new
clothes
 make us fashionable and stunning, while, we cannot deny that the number of abandoned
clothes
 is increasing day by day. So I believe that keeping buying new
clothes
 will cause negative problems.
First
, we are living in a
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 world which is surrounded by newly designed products and advertisements. We hardly refuse those appealing materials, so in order to stay in fashion, we purchase
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 rather
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 we really need. Every year we see the issue through media: overconsumption is more serious than before and it makes tremendous waste pollution.
Second
, Government should establish policies to reduce the quantity of
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waste. They could set up some organizations to recycle old
clothes
 and donate them to undeveloped areas.
Moreover
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 should encourage local companies to create secondhand goods business, on which users can upload their used but still
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good quality
clothes
 for sale and others can buy new
clothes
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 a more affordable price.
For instance
, there is an app in China, and it is becoming popular, because it provides a platform for users to
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 their used products, and it is cultivating people to accept a more sustainable lifestyle. Lots of celebrities are showing us they declutter old belongings and donate their
clothes
 to certain organizations. In conclusion, to be a fashionable person is no longer required to wear
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fabulous.
On the contrary
, leading a life in an environment-friendly style will make
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 stay
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 trend.
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