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Some people believe that there should be the death penalty for extreme serious crimes. Others believe that it is not morally correct to kill criminals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have a
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 criminals that
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 acted on serious crime or not. In
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 I am going to examine
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 question from both points of view and
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 explain why I believe that it is still crucial for the
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 system to have deaths as an option. There are
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 who argue that the benefits of
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 considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
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 is that it is important for the criminals to pay the price of the act which they had taken. These criminals are
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 who have taken intolerable acts,
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 many believe that it is appropriate for
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 to take
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 penalties, even if
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 a
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 possible to say that,
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having extreme penalties as an option
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 suppresses
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 from taking risky criminal acts. One good illustration of
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 is that in Japan the number of imprisonment is effectively low compared to other countries.
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 figure is thought to be in effect of Japan being one of few countries which
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 the
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, others believe that taking life away from individuals should not be a decision made by one another.
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 often hold
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 opinion tightly as many think that
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 is a decision made by fate. A
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 point is that allowing
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 authority to the police could be dangerous. A particularly good example here can be drawn out from past history
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 when the minority of the community were mass imprisoned and sentenced to
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 from the commands of the leaders. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
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 on how extreme criminal acts are unforgiven.
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