Some people believe that there should be the death penalty for extreme serious crimes. Others believe that it is not morally correct to kill criminals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have a
death
penalty
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criminals that
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acted on serious crime or not. In
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I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
explain why I believe that it is still crucial for the
penalty
system to have deaths as an option. There are
people
who argue that the benefits of
death
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penalty
considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that it is important for the criminals to pay the price of the act which they had taken. These criminals are
people
who have taken intolerable acts,
therefore
many believe that it is appropriate for
such
people
to take
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penalties, even if
that is
a
death
sentence. It is
also
possible to say that,
by
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having extreme penalties as an option
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also
suppresses
people
from taking risky criminal acts. One good illustration of
this
is that in Japan the number of imprisonment is effectively low compared to other countries.
This
figure is thought to be in effect of Japan being one of few countries which
has
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the
death
penalty
.
On the other hand
, others believe that taking life away from individuals should not be a decision made by one another.
People
often hold
this
opinion tightly as many think that
death
is a decision made by fate. A
second
point is that allowing
such
authority to the police could be dangerous. A particularly good example here can be drawn out from past history
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when the minority of the community were mass imprisoned and sentenced to
death
from the commands of the leaders. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel that it is still important for countries to incorporate
death
penalties.
This
is because it gives out a clear message to the
people
on how extreme criminal acts are unforgiven.
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