In many city, planner tend to arrange shops schools, officies and homes in a specific area and separated them each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages.

In 1990 and 2010, the number of
trips
made by children in a country to and from
school
using different
transportations
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means is shown in the chart.
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overwhelming number of
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to and from
school
in 1990 compared to 2010. Not only that
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the chart
also
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to
school
more than 2010 kids. There is a clear difference in car usage in 1990 compared to 2010, with 2010 having around 6 million more
trips
. There is
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around 6 million more than 2010. The rest of cycling, walking and bus, and
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, all have the 1990
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over compared to 2010, only leading
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passenger. Overall, the
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avarage
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number of
trips
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school
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overtime
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from the year 1990 to 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • zoning
  • urban sprawl
  • mixed-use developments
  • urban planning
  • traffic management
  • residential areas
  • economic hub
  • commute times
  • social stratification
  • environmental impact
  • public transportation
  • green spaces
  • urban ecosystem
  • infrastructure
  • community cohesion
  • service accessibility
  • land use
  • industrial district
  • commercial centers
  • livability
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