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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

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It can be seen these days that the amount of
violence
 portrayed on
television
 is certainly increasing. I have
also
 seen the behaviour of
children
 changing with correspondence to
this
. I agree that the increase of
violence
 portrayed on
television
 is having a negative impact on
children
’s behaviour. With time, entertainment media for
children
 are changing.
This
 change occurs along with the changes in the real world.
Violence
 is increasing everywhere and unfortunately, it is being normalized.
As a result
, certain amounts of
violence
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
show examples
 included in cartoons and other media for
children
 with the thought process that it is normal. And with the increase in
violence
 in real life, the
violence
 portrayed on
television
 or other forms of media is
also
 increasing.
This
 normalizes
violence
 for the
children
 watching, and in the worst cases, makes some
children
 attracted to it. They start to enjoy destructive activities. From what I have seen, many
children
 these days have habits like breaking their toys or playing violent games.
Furthermore
, many
children
 have grown shorter tempers and are very violent when having tantrums. These
children
 often grow up to be delinquents. The increase in
violence
 on
television
 is without a doubt affecting
children
 in a negative way. The negative effects of
this
 problem can certainly be mitigated through proper parenting and guidance. If the child can be made to understand that
violence
 is not good, the outcome of
this
 exposure to it is far smaller. But even so, it affects the psychology of
children
 and contributes to their personality while growing up. To conclude, the effect that
violence
 shown on
television
 has on
children
 is certainly negative. Even if the effects can be controlled to a certain extent, the child is still exposed to content which is not beneficial for its psychology.
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