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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior.

Television and other forms of entertainment have a strong effect in developing the values and influencing the behavior of children. Sadly, the majority of today’s television programs show inappropriate violent content. If watched under adult supervision, this negative impact can also be prevented. I partially concur that violent television programs has a negative effect on a minor’s behavior.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior.

Nowadays, television is a major source of entertainment and sometimes a medium through which children's behaviour is impacted because of the surge in violent scenes that may have a negative effect on youngsters if they are not under parental surveillance.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been an increase in violence featured in the mass media in recent times. It is argued by some people that this trend has detrimental effects on the way young ones behave. I agreed with this view, as violence promotes bullying and it desensitizes children's view of crime.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour.Do you agree or disagree

Children's behaviour is manipulated by many things and watching TV set is one of them.This essay will provide a brief discussion about how television is deteriorating children's brain.Teenagers are now more inclined towards crime by watching negative things going on in the world and television likes to emphasise it.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Violence is undeniably one of the world’s leading problems nowadays. There has been a surge in television violence, and it is believed to have a drawback to children’s behavior. In my opinion, I undoubtedly agree with it; however, this violence perhaps can be applied to their life-lesson.
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These days, we are seeing incresing amount of violence on the television, and this is having negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree.

Television is one of the many products of technology in the 20th century, it is one of the many ways children learn and are able to to get conversant with the world around them. However the increase in the amount of violence aired on television is very alarming as they have caused negative changes in their behaviour and also there emotional and mental health. As such I agree that the increase in violence has a negative effect on children.
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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,abundant incidents of violence are shown on the TV.This will have a bad impact on the mind of the children.This will also affect their behaviour in many ways.It is often argued that it is more disadvantageous to the youngsters . I will agree with this statement and discuss more in upcoming paragraphs.
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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

Television is one of the most familiar's entertainment devices for everyone. However, there is growing sentiment today that there are a lot of violent actions on television shows and films. From my point of view, I strongly believe that violence has a neg
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children are being exposed significantly to television programmes showing different forms of violence. I believe that it has damaging effects on their behaviour and mental health.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Modern world today, television programs contains many violent contents.Some argue that these can be negatively influenced on a child.In my opinion,I completely agree with the viewpoint because when children watch inappropriate contents for a long time ,thier mind became desensitizing towards such things and started to think this is normal.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, watching television has become a habit for many people. Children are very enthusiastic about cartoons and movies on television. It is strongly agreed that violent content on television has a bad impact on their behaviour. Analysing the capability of addiction to TV and limitation in the form of reduced discipline will prove this.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether the amount of violence on TV and cinema has affected young people in our society is something which cannot be quantified or proved. My opinion is though that the answer is “yes, it has”.
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hese days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Watching television nowadays is become a part of people daily activities to spent our leisure time and gathering new information worldwide. In the other side, some people believe that seeing television give a negative effect to children behaviour. While this is understandable, Not only adult people, but also children who watch television. Some television daily programs showing a violence on their TV program. Many people link violence on television with the real world. Children who do not have a mind border yetusually copying behaviour they see on the screen. For example, in Indonesia in these recent years children delinquency increased dramatically. They do crimes based on violence they saw in TV. This trend makes them become a criminals some case make someone lost their life. Consequently, some TV programs giving a negative impacts to children future.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Television and other forms of entertainment have a strong effect in developing the values and influencing the behaviour of children. Sadly, the majority of programs show inappropriate violent content. I agree that such violent programs have an adverse effect on the children’s behaviour.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Watching television nowadays is become a part of people daily activities to spent our leisure time and gathering new information worldwide. In the other side, some people believe that seeing television give a negative effect to children behaviour. While this is understandable, I strongly believe that each opinion has a strong reasons.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

Violent content in the form of video games, media channels, and television dramas has seen a rapid increase over the last few years. This form of content, when exposed to children, could have negative consequences on their personality and behavior. Some children might be more prone to the negative effects of violence on television than others might, but I do not agree that all children would demonstrate violent behavior due to exposure toof brutal content on television.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an increasing amount of violence broadcasted on television nowadays which is having a negative effect on children's attitude. As children are very good learners they adapt what they see immediately, hence when they watch destruction and violence on the screens they learn from it which reflects in their behaviour. Therefore, I completely agree with this statement that watching violence on TV has a bad impact on children's behaviour.
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hese days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

The type of content being watched on televeision or computer by a person has a longlasting influence on their psyche.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

In these modern times, with access of television to everyone, children are exposed to an increasing magnitude of violence which is morphing their innocent natures into something feral.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

The world is revolving with the innovation of electronic gadgets. Television is one of the most important gadget, which is part of everyday human life. It helps to see the news around the globe from home. Moreover, They can enjoy movies, dramas, cartoons and so on. Some people believe they are providing valuable information to children about their education and future prospects. However, I personally feel that they are feeding violence to their mind. I am contradicting that television is sending a good message to kids.
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