What are some of the factors in modern society that causes this stress and how we can reduce it?

In the modern era, the stressful become easier affects
people
. It is because of the pressure and the workload that can't be handled by the
employees
. In
this
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I will discuss the cause of the stress and the way to reduce it.
Firstly
, in
this
era
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the pressures have become higher and higher.
For example
, to follow the needs with the prices are more expensive, the
people
force themself to work more.
On the other hand
, the amount of
jobs
has
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become less than before. It impacts the competition to get a job. Nowadays, the minimum standard to get good
jobs
is
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bachelor's
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as a result
of the competition.
Moreover
,
people
who have
jobs
will survive with their
jobs
,
otherwise
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it will so stressful because
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pressure and working hours. A few of the options to be a worker has made
people
are under pressure,
furthermore
the
company
willing to increase their profit which reduces the salaries and give more working hours. In one word, an
employee
has no option and is still forced to work at that
company
.
On the other hand
, there are solutions to reduce the stress,
such
as a guarantee of healthy with good salaries. But, the
employees
can't do it by themself,
this
is why government must take responsibility. The change in the
regulation
will help the
employee
,
instead
of giving cash to the
employee
. It will impact the
company
regulations too, and the
company
will guarantee the life of the
employee
. No more overload of workloads and work hours,
also
they get insurance for their health condition.
Furthermore
,
employees
must make a group to defend injustices of the
company
's
regulation
. In conclusion, to defend against injustice
regulation
of the companies, the government need to take charge to build a
regulation
to help the
employees
.
Also
,
employees
must make a union and can discuss with the
company
's regulator before they released the
regulation
.
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