What are some of the factors in modern society that causes this stress and how we can reduce it?
In the modern era, the stressful become easier affects pressure and working hours. A few of the options to be a worker has made
people
. It is because of the pressure and the workload that can't be handled by the employees
. In this
essay
I will discuss the cause of the stress and the way to reduce it.
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,essay
Firstly
, in this
era
the pressures have become higher and higher. Add a comma
,era
For example
, to follow the needs with the prices are more expensive, the people
force themself to work more. On the other hand
, the amount of jobs
has
become less than before. It impacts the competition to get a job. Nowadays, the minimum standard to get good Change the verb form
have
jobs
is Correct article usage
a bachelor's
bachelor's
Change the noun form
bachelors
bachelor
as a result
of the competition. Moreover
, people
who have jobs
will survive with their jobs
,otherwise
it will so stressful becauseAdd a comma
,otherwise
Add the preposition
of
people
are under pressure, furthermore
the company
willing to increase their profit which reduces the salaries and give more working hours. In one word, an employee
has no option and is still forced to work at that company
.
On the other hand
, there are solutions to reduce the stress, such
as a guarantee of healthy with good salaries. But, the employees
can't do it by themself, this
is why government must take responsibility. The change in the regulation
will help the employee
, instead
of giving cash to the employee
. It will impact the company
regulations too, and the company
will guarantee the life of the employee
. No more overload of workloads and work hours, also
they get insurance for their health condition. Furthermore
, employees
must make a group to defend injustices of the company
's regulation
.
In conclusion, to defend against injustice regulation
of the companies, the government need to take charge to build a regulation
to help the employees
. Also
, employees
must make a union and can discuss with the company
's regulator before they released the regulation
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