Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, recent famous brands are

depended

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on the high technical promotion to

presentings

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presenting

their goods to the community,alongside, there is no

real-demanding

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of

a

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society for achieving

in

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a top position for high sailing,while ,it may be possible the taste of

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consumers

contumers

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consumers

have a moderate effect in the setting of

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trading in famous trading companies, in attention to above facets,I completely agree that the advertisement is a great controlling factor for

demnds

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demands

of

publicy

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publicly

to buying somethings that are not

realy

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really

essential . There are successful brands which

these

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have barrow their popularity from techniques of presenting to society,

for example

,

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Nike is a most

favorite

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favourite

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brand among athletes ,

however

,there are many

sport

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companies around the world

such

as Reebok or Puma but it is still on the top of

desire

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the desire

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to wearing the Nike because , in great events

such

as world football games where there are a huge gathering many nations to follow their teams the Nike has been used by the

footbalist

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football

footballs

,so , it becomes in a memory of each young people and in other situation It is a most choosing

goods

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to buy by the youngers,in conclusion, when advertising

have

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been combining with emotional situations has

been stayed

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on the people's mind.

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, there is a significant

growing

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in

usage

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the usage

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of beauty products in

comparing

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to the past, for clarifying

this

behaviour ,the UK has

been

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conducted a research study on

the

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women ,so ,

scientist

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scientists

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have been

devided

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divided

females

in

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into

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two groups,

first

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group has faced with two short clip of

make up

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with the cream powder by the

celebriries

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celebrities

and

second

group has not undertaken to any reels or trading movie,in the end, the

first

group have more tendency to provide

this

cream in comparing

anothers

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another

others

,It is well understood that the celebrities

advertisment

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advertisement

has

more

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successful effect to sailing

a

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beauty products.