- You want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called CELPIP-TIP, which organizes such travel. * Write an email to the volunteer in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things - Explain why you want to volunteer. - State what your skills and experience. - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and how long.

#work #country #company #celpip-tip #travel #email #volunteer #skills

Dear sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to offer some voluntary work in

third

-world countries. I have heard about your agency from one of my friends that you need some people to do community work internationally. I would like to perform

this

duty as I am going to graduate

year and I require some practical experience before starting my professional career. I am currently doing my MBBS at one of the best universities.

Therefore

, I have a good command of nursing.

Also

, I can take care of the patients, diagnose their problems, and suggest treatments and medications.

Moreover

, I will be available during flexible hours

for example

, during shift duties.

Besides

that, I can assist doctors and manage the data of their patients on a computer. I would be obliged to you if you send me to Pakistan since there is a high demand for

this

kind of job. I will be available from May to July due to my summer vacation. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on Wed Jul 13 2022

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